Fic Rec! Things I Never Wanted to Tell You @ Daily Deviant

[boundbooks]

Over at daily_deviant, a smokin' hot and extremely creative Draco/Hermione fic has been posted!

Things I Never Wanted to Tell You by rilla_licious.

Summary: Something goes wrong with Hermione's research, and suddenly one of her biggest secrets is written all over Draco's face.

Notes: GO READ! Seriously funny, hot and creative. Plus, it's co-workers Ministry fic, with Hermione as Draco's boss. :D

Excerpt: He rolled up one sleeve violently and held it out for her to see. Thoughts, taken from somewhere in the back of her mind and scrawled across his body. Filthy, prurient thoughts. About Draco Malfoy.

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"You probably don't even suck cock, do you?"

"That's not what it says on your right cheekbone," she said tartly.

Comments

[musyc]

Yeah, I can't stand him written that way. It makes me think that the author has stuck him permanently in first-year mode. I honestly expected to see "my father will hear about this" somewhere in the first few paragraphs. If a piece is going to be set post-war or anomalous future, where the characters are supposedly adults, then allow them to act like adults instead of children. He can be written as irritating and complaining without resorting to the type of descriptions that would be more appropriately applied to a tween in the middle of a past-bedtime tantrum.

[boundbooks]

Hm, well, I do sympathize with Draco in that situation, because if it were me I'd be doing the whining + a side of homicide. Don't know if you've read the fic yet, but it is an embarrassments galore situation. :P

I guess the fic also works for me because it's Hermione's POV, and I saw her as doing this whole 'Oh, Draco is acting so childishly' when she's actually repressing her own absolute mortification about the situation by trying to spin it - to herself - as Draco's overreaction, when it's actually kind of a situation where he's completely justified for exploding. (Embarrassment galore). XD

So, that was my take on things, in that Hermione's narration was meant to be read as unreliable, because we do see in the fic that she's trying to spin the situation to herself. :)

[musyc]

but it is an embarrassments galore situation.

Ah, then that's a good reason not to read it, for me. I hate fics where the entire purpose is to embarrass or humiliate a character. (Unless it's a kink and that's what they want, and even then it's iffy for me.)

[boundbooks]

Oh, then I definitely don't rec this fic for you! It sounds like although this fic works well for my tastes, it wouldn't do at all for yours. :)