Oh, I actually adore whiny Draco, so it didn't occur to me that it might be a turn-off for people!

I will say, though, that were I in Draco's position in that fic, I would whine so much, if that helps. Total embarrassment galore. XD

With what you said, can't guarantee that you'll like the fic, but I do recommend giving it a second shot, just to be sure. :)